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Posts: 39 Joined: 29-April 05 From: Houston Texas Member No.: 6,381 |
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#1
Apr 29 2005, 06:59 PM
Trapped in a ditch Just insanity and me I’m gnawing at these chains That forever restrain me My teeth are shattered I’m bleeding uncontrollably My ditch keeps getting deeper As the earth swallows me It was you, not just me Who dragged me deeper Into this hell and my hole Keeps getting steeper You stabbed me in the back Time and time again I never hate You give me reason to resent Bleeding Wildly Depleting My soul Crying For help Dying Alone Trying To exit Failing Myself Driven Insanity Dying Alone You contradicted my plans And all the hope I had My misery is displayed For bystanders to laugh My face is blank Body with no certain image I represent all mankind Cause we’ll all soon be in this My hope dangles on a string And life is torn from my corpse Flashbacks of my life Bring me remorse And now I have No chance of survival But I keep trying to escape So I can at least keep my soul Constant Fear Un-ending Torment Wishing For death Not My own Feeling Resent Chains Restrain Begging Forgiveness Dying Alone ________________________________ Feedback appreciated |
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#2
Apr 29 2005, 07:07 PM
Great poem. I like the use of some of the lines only having one word, builds up effect! A+ |
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