Perfect:

I've been in search
Night after night
For the perfect words
To describe how right
It feels to be with you
And how wonderfull you make me feel
how somehow i just knew
That this love is real
How you're all i think about
And i miss you when you're gone
how i have no doubt
That next to you is where i belong
But words could never prove
How committed i am to you
So all i can do
Is offer this simple poem to you

More then you know:

Eyes like the sky
One look and time flies by
I feel the warmth of your face
As i begin to trace
Every line, every scar
That helps define you who you are
But beneath this exterior
Lies something superior
A woman that is true
And feels exactly like i do

The deeper i look, the longer i stare
The more i see all that is there
You are so much more than you know
And these words will never be able to show
How much i adore you
Or how you taught me to trust
And how much i need you
Or how much i love us










.... just two more poems i have written, please give some feedback on them

Hey those are really good i would never ever be able to write soemthing so good

those are really good, I could never write as good as you if I tried T_T. Your so creative

thanks. thats means a lot i'm sure you could. these i wrote to my girlfriend back when we were going out, but now thats over so i figured i would share them with the public. just try your hand at it, i'm sure you would do just fine. all you have to do is write down what your thinking and make it rhyme lol.... simple as that

1 word, 1000 meanings, 2 syllables. Coolio! I have never viewed the creativity topic before. Anyways your poems are quite good. Keep up the good work if you are going to make more poems. I used to make parody for songs, until 1 of mine went too far and I got banned on one of the forums for it. Eh... hope to see more of your poems around xD

Absolutely beautiful. I've always wished that i could write poetry.